You lost me at “plasma”
Let’s all go ahead and cross “plasma” off of the list of words that work in poems.
Plasma is kind of like a swear word, except more obviously terrible. It’s as if “moist” and the c-word had a baby, and made you think about donating fluids. All while relaxing w/ blog poetry.
I loved the part where he was talking about whipping himself a lot, and said you were “in anger” with someone. I dig it. Oh also you LEGIT wrote about choking fetish for three solid scroll-lengths. Can relate.
But then you said “plasma”,
and the curtain dropped.
Hello, mr. Oz.
I dare you to prove me wrong.
Now for my mic drop…